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Post by ejsaxdude on May 23, 2007 11:18:14 GMT -5
Name: Koji Hyuga Age: 14 Yen:300 Village: Village hidden in the leaves Ninja Tool: Shuriken Rank: Academy student Clan: Hyuga Jutsu: Substitution Jutsu/ Kawarmi no Jutsu Clone Jutsu/ Bunshin no Jutsu Shadow Clone Jutsu/ Kage Bunshin no Jutsu 4 Trigrams 32 Palms: The incomplete form of the 8 trigrams 64 Palms as long as they are within the trigrams they are in range of Koji's attack: Chakra usage:25 Damage: 15 range: Mid
Minor Rotation: Basically the same as the rotation but it only shields attacks it doesn't throw the opponent in the other direction like Neji's rotation: Chakra usage:10 Damage:5 range: close
Summon- Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan Bio: Koji is part of the main branch and is slowly mastering the Gentle fist technique. He constantly trains trying to perfect his skills so that his father will notice him. Physical Description:Brown hair, 5"6' and skinny build Chakra:100 Health Points:300 Elemental Affinity: Earth Elemental Skill: Water Fire Wind Lightning Earth Sound Shadow
(Some of it confused me but thats all I got out of it. Just tell me whats wrong and I'll fix it.)
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Post by Hyuuga Nejin on May 23, 2007 17:58:37 GMT -5
In the Jutsu skill you have to explain how much damage your attacks do, how much chakra it takes, and what the range is. Also, you're an Academy Student.
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Post by ejsaxdude on May 23, 2007 18:10:43 GMT -5
Modified post and made minor change to the description of the trigrams attack. Stats of the jutsu are put beside the jutsu description.
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Post by Hyuuga Nejin on May 23, 2007 22:00:07 GMT -5
The most damage an Academy Student can do is 15. Check out the Character Creation Guide. Don't use my character as a build. By the way, following in Neji's footsteps is taken, as my character(his son)has that bio. This takes place a couple of years in the future with the main cast having children.
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Post by ejsaxdude on May 24, 2007 16:24:56 GMT -5
I haven't looked at your character yet but I had copied and pasted the creation guide then started working on it. Either way I changed everything you said. I accedently had the damage and chakra usage mixed up. Also I changed to Bio.
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